One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of individuals believing in the previous century when human astronaut first arrived on Moon they said it is a big step for mankind, while others oppose it by saying that it makes no difference or no change in human daily life. In my opinion the former apprehension seems to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with there are deluges of arguments in favour of that when humans landed on moon for the very first time. It create big impact on humans life. The most preponderant one is that improvement in multiple aspects of human daily life. To elaborate it when humans landed on Moon for the first time the had used light weight tooth brush. With the help of that invention in today's world it used by each and every individual. Apart from this the suits that had been made for astronauts for Moon landing and survive their. The material that had used to made them it is used nowadays in sports area. Because it provides them multiple benefits. Such as comfortable and long lasting material. This material is used to construct shoes, suits and many more products for athletes. For instance the study results published by NASA in 1998 clearly indicates that there there are some metals that was found on the surface of the moon. That are helping in medical departments to form new vaccines for multiple disease. Hence, it is clear why in the last century when human astronaut arrived on Moon he said it is a big step for mankind.
Furthermore another pivotal aspect of above aforementioned proposition it only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas such as upcoming life. To make it justifiable there are several study has been conducted for the upcoming generation that are clearly indicate that the way that humans polluting planet earth. This is clear indication that the life on earth for mankind will no longer suitable. In order to face that problem there are several space organisations that are making efforts to make life possible on other planets. There are few example like Space-x that is organised by Elon musk and NASA are the most popular examples of these. Apart from this it may not be noticeable that the landing on Moon did not effect the daily life much or not. But if anyone analyse it properly then they can understand the big effect that was only possible with the help of landing on humans. Hence, It is crucial and critical for the development for the society.
To conclude having pondered over above stated it is apparent that last century a astronaut land on Moon it had helped humans in multiple aspects weather it is about sports our medical. That's why benefits of landing on Moon by astronauts are indeed too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7256097561 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44827767082 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475609756098 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6527164842 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4230769231 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345932409311 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896324750348 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103917018446 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212041273062 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713333706733 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.