Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Submitted by Anna18 on Tue, 02/14/2023 - 13:07

Some would argue that children brought up in wealthy families are less prepared for later years, as they are not so likely to go through difficult circumstances and get much life experience. However, they do have an advantage that is easier affordable education. Personally, I have grown up in a family without luxuries but having things necessary. Moreover, some experiences with my family have made me a hard-working person with a strong desire to improve myself despite not having money. There are some points based on this topic that I would like to put into words.

Firstly, you appreciate things more when you realize that an effort is required to get them. People who have been brought up in poor families learn to work from an earlier age as many want to carry out their goals to pursue a better standard of life, then they help their relatives.

On the other hand, many parents agree that they give their children as much as they can since their childhood was lack of things they wanted and could not have. In view of this fact, some wealthy parents are likely to satisfy the whims of teenagers and sometimes become sensitive adults that struggle dealing with difficult situations on their own. However, it is not always true owing to some take advantage of affordable education and do not struggle a lot with life problems in their futures.

Last, every single reflection of people is important to warn us about events in life that we would not like to undergo but we can learn from others. Parents of poor families are the most important reflection to encourage offspring to improve themselves and do not go through necessity over time.

To summarize, although parents want the best for their little ones, tough experiences are vital in life considering that you learn to value more things and encourage yourself to stand out in life. Therefore, I agree that offspring from families that do not have large amounts of money are better trained to deal with challenging circumstances.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
...es learn to work from an earlier age as many want to carry out their goals to pursue a be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to deal'.
Suggestion: to deal
...s become sensitive adults that struggle dealing with difficult situations on their own....
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87976539589 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54085222545 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0347887991 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354310420316 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114163972222 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073869381848 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180906936657 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727539246074 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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