The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 – 2000.
Given is the line graph depicting various transitions in the birth rates of China and the USA from 1920 to 2000.
Perceptibly, both rates of birth in the two given nations witnessed a fluctuation before experiencing a significant plunge.
Regarding birth rates in china, starting at 10% in 1920, afterward, there was a steady fluctuation prior to falling back to roughly 10% in 1930. Thenceforth, the mentioned proportion sharply increase to 15% in 1935 before witnessed a threefold decrease to 5% in the middle of 1940. In the next 5 years, this rates remained intact. Strikingly, the percentage leap and hit the zenith in 1950, with 20% recorded. What even more prominent is the opposite was true for this figure in the short time later, and approximately 7% was achieved in 1955. In the remaining period, the birth rates ratched down consistently to about 2% in 2000.
In terms of the USA’s rates of birth, it was gradually fluctuated around 11% - 13% in the first 20 years of the surveyed period. Shortly after, the figure experienced am immediate fall to about 6% in 1945 before suddenly escalating to about 14% in 1950. Despite a sharp rose in 1950, the China’s birth rate was still considerably higher than the USA’s. Afterward, the USA’s percentage shared the similar trend with the China’s, and 20% was reached in 2000.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-02-24 | nvtrung309 | 84 | view |
| 2022-07-20 | Yahya.ihyaroza | 56 | view |
| 2022-06-26 | AndewYoung | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-23 | tranvuongphuongmy | 63 | view |
| 2022-01-13 | ariel00 | view |
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company The survey was carried out on two groups of workers those aged from 18 30 and those aged 45 60 and shows factors affecting their work performance Writ 84
- In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally Why do people buy imported food What could be done to encourage people to buy local food 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 84
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... witnessed a threefold decrease to 5% in the middle of 1940. In the next 5 years,...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, regarding, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94247787611 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79475754225 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8497620515 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298305034117 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116956754711 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116490891356 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21778407963 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122657894695 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.