The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the bar charts depicting the home Internet use of Australians, divided by various reasons and age groups.
Perceptibly, most Australian residents use the Internet for Emailing purpose. Besides, there was a similarity in the amount of people who use the Internet for Emailing and Paying bills online or online banking among all ages, social networking accession seems more popular to younger people than the older.
It is noticeable that there was approximately 95% of Australian home Internet users access the Internet to send and receive Email, whereas roughly 60% use the Internet for the other two aforementioned purposes. To be more accurate, about 80% of all age groups’ users go online because of emailing services needed.
In terms of the amount of Australians who use the Internet for online payment, there was a parallel shared among all ages, similar with emailing figures’ trend, with about 40-60% recorded. In reverse, the figure contrasts that the older people are, the less attracted by the social network; therefore, while about 90% of 15-24-year-olds people use the Internet for Social networking, merely 20% of 65 years old and older residents access the Internet for the same purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the bar charts depicting the home Inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74569293937 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558974358974 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8178387824 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.428571429 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178681074387 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107897855839 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660813381606 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141728495486 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063893308269 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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