Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial
background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that attending university is the best way to equip with knowledge in specific disciplines and then can land a decent job. While there are some benefits to say that everyone have the right to have access to university education and the tuition fees must be removed by the government. I maintain the opinion that government should remains the same principles.
On the one hand, An exemption to tuition fees means that people from lower socioeconomic backgrounds can have a chance to pursue higher education. Moreover, at the state level, society will
benefit from a high level of civilized citizens. Therefore, crime rate can reduce significantly as people can distinguish between right and wrong.
On the other hand, this practice may create a hyper-competitive labor market. Students studying college for free may put a strain on the state treasury as they must provide salaries for teacher and others who maintain the basic amenities. Moreover,sStudents may not pay attention to academic results and study because it will cost them nothing to re-take a subject.
In short, In conclusion, although the removal of tuition fees presents certain advantages, I contend that it should not be encouraged due to its drawback.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reover, at the state level, society will benefit from a high level of civilized c...
^^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sStudents
...o maintain the basic amenities. Moreover,sStudents may not pay attention to academic resul...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98347113276 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5336748616 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1891756746 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638398098599 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073016584271 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856232457531 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072460743009 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reover, at the state level, society will benefit from a high level of civilized c...
^^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sStudents
...o maintain the basic amenities. Moreover,sStudents may not pay attention to academic resul...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98347113276 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5336748616 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1891756746 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638398098599 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073016584271 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856232457531 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072460743009 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.