The given line chart gives information about the proportion of citizens in five different age categories in a city who took part in music concerts from 2010 to 2015.
It is evident that people aged 16 to 54 had a tendency to go to music concerts over the period of 5 years. However, although the percentage of people over 75 increased gradually during the same period, this figure accounted for the lowest proportion among 5 age groups. In contrast, the figure for people aged 55-64 decreased slightly.
In 2010, the highest proportion of residents participating in music concerts was from 25 to 44, at over 50%, followed by people aged 16-24 and 45-54, at 40%. However, in the following years, the percentage of people in a city going to music concerts who were from 16 to 24 years old went up significantly to approximately 65%, which was higher than the figure for people in group 25-44 ( 50%) and 45-54 (below 50%).
In contrast to the four age categories, there was a slow decline to around 21% in the group 55-64 between 2010 and 2015. Additionally, despite growing steadily during the 5-year period, the proportion of citizens over 75 still had the lowest percentage among the five age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ing in music concerts was from 25 to 44, at over 50%, followed by people aged 16-...
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Suggestion:
...han the figure for people in group 25-44 50% and 45-54 below 50%. In contrast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77403846154 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66968084628 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4123951494 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335909784214 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151177280222 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670597388378 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207502568163 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435534295195 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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