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The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.
Given is the diagram depicting the process of producing two different types of olive oil.
It is perceptible that, this is a process with multiple steps, starting with harvesting ingredients from the olive tree and ending with the production of olive oil and extra virgin olive oil.
Initially, olives are collected from the trees to be milled. Afterwards, the milled olived is pressed and treated in two various ways depending on the ultimate purposes. Regards to the production of extra virgin olive oil, the materials provided from the last step are purified by a filter machine before being converted to the final product. In terms of making olive oil, there are a variety of specialized machines attributed to refining the pressed olive to prepare for the final stage. Ultimately, the prepared olive oil is combined with virgen olive oil, which is produced from the former process, to become the expecting oil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the final product. In terms of making olive oil, there are a variety of specia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07947019868 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5857174686 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0272813314 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163793577009 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868522875228 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455033616464 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127326585215 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00603756327758 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.