The mind of people, nowadays, are kept active because of the books they read while seeing movies and Television is passive, and does not need a person to imagine things. As per my belief , I agree with both statements above, and I will discuss my point in the paragraphs ahead.
To commence, when people read books, it keeps their minds active. This is because a person will think about what he or she is reading as they engage in reading. However, a person will have a high level of concentration as long as that person is a dedicated reader. Thus, if people endulge in reading books, then their minds will be kept active.
On the other hand, watching films and Television is passive, and does not require a person to use their imagination. The reasonn is that movies and TV will engage people with visuals, so they do not necessarily need to imagine any particular thing. Some people can still have conversations, for instance, during movie nights with friends, but this cannot be possible when you are reading a book because your whole attention will be drawn to what you are reading.
To recapitulate, I have discussed my points above to show the extent to which I agree that a person's mind will be active as they read books, and that seeing films and TV does not require an individual to use their imagination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52726553272 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1556324859 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414556731285 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165821670673 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086390533063 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256756376382 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264277270527 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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