People aim to achieve a balance between their work and personal life, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?
Today, Achieving a balance between work and life is one of the important goals for many people, however, many find this difficult to achieve. In this essay, I will discuss some main causes of this issue and suggest some solutions
One of the main causes of not having a balance is that people don’t have enough time to think about their life, the busy and pressure from works and children might even not allow them to relax while making a balance between work and life requires lots of efforts. People may have to change their lifestyles, schedules, therefore they should more free time to prepare and be ready for then new changes. Another causes are the problem that people are currently facing, some people tend to value montetary things while having poor financial means, which forces them to work more to afford the things they love, for example, cars, houses or real estate. On the contrary, Some people might be unemployed and couldn’t find a job, or have to stay at home taking care for their children, those concerns are reasons why people are struggling to approach the balance of life.
There are several solutions to this problem. Firstly people could spend a few days off work, sitting down and thinking carefully about whether professional life or personal life they are prioritizing more at the present, therefore have suitable changes to apply for their life. Moreover, people could seek other’s help, for example, asking their husbands, parents, or neighbors to take care of children several days a week and they would have a chance to find a new occupation instead of staying at home all day.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the unbalance between work and life, However, there are also necessary measures to address this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'many finds'.
Suggestion: many finds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35045149327 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.074263965 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.777777778 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332924287281 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137463092278 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552094379297 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179839060704 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555136260247 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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