The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee
The diagram shows the variety of steps in life circle of honey bee.
Overall, the process consits of 6 steps, begining with female lay 1 to 2 eggs every three days and ending up with the 4 days to maturity.
First of all, female of honey bee will lay her eggs 1 or 2 in each tree days, after 9 until 10 days the eggs will be hatching and 5 days after hatch the eggs will be changing being a baby of honey bee.
In the next steps, the body of honey bee will grow and became a biggest until 7 days and in days 9 the honey bee give the nymph moults 3 times as it grows and after this circumstances the baby honey bee will became young adult emerges and until they are more maturity after 4 days being young adult they will married again and the life cycle of honey bee takes 34-36 days until being adult honey bee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... body of honey bee will grow and became a biggest until 7 days and in days 9 the ...
^
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ph moults 3 times as it grows and after this circumstances the baby honey bee will b...
^^^^
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...s circumstances the baby honey bee will became young adult emerges and until they are ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'marry'
Suggestion: marry
...fter 4 days being young adult they will married again and the life cycle of honey bee t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.03086419753 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86089356467 2.65546596893 70% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.149859041 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.25 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2368050141 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175625430536 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136252667689 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175625430536 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136252667689 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.72 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.98 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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