The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The government's investment in arts, music, and theatre is equally important to invest these funds in public services. Arts, music, and theatre not only contribute greatly to education and the improvement of the national cultural level but also enhance people's happiness and the government's income.
After thousands of years of development, art, music, and theatre have played a significant role in regulating human physiological functions. By experiencing these artistic works, we can be spiritually inspired, and express emotions and sorrows along with the content that works express and deepen our standing of ourselves and our perception of nature and society. Up to now, we can still be moved by the touching love between Yang Guifei and Tang Xuanzong, who transcend time and space in "song of Everlasting sorrow". We can also appreciate different life experiences, ask ourselves to reflect on our own views on love, and comprehend the literary techniques and structure of it. In addition, such as "The Kock out" and the movie "Man Jianghong", which were popular at home and abroad during the Spring Festival this year, not only met the people's demand for entertainment but also created considerable economic income and foreign recognition of Chinese culture. Last but not the least, art, music, and theatre also carry the role of educating next generation. For example, the traditional "Twenty-Four Filial Piety Diagram" express correct values, allowing our excellent traditional culture to continue and develop.
From what is said above, we can safely conclude that art, music, and theatre play a vital role in education, national cultural level, happiness, and so on. Their positive effects are so deep and wide that it is a wise choice to take them seriously. So the government's investment in arts, music, and theatre is equally important to invest these funds in public services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
The governments investment in arts, music, and theatre ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... also enhance peoples happiness and the governments income. After thousands of years of ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...e choice to take them seriously. So the governments investment in arts, music, and theatre ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02502708895 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5284586696 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222605331471 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101921433446 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138061567848 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204262471808 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106374583967 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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