Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people in the world think that in future the number of cars used will declined. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement. There are several reasons why I believe in former argument, which I will demonstrate further in the following essay.
First and foremost, there might be a decrease in car number as the result of the improvement in public transportation system. Nowadays, the transportation system is being developed fast. In the future, the transportation network will be much denser than it's used to be. Hence, the complex transport destination creates a chance for people to be more convenient in choosing means to move between wanted location. As the result, people tend to prefer using public rather than their personal car.
Secondly, the public transport vehicles are being more modern and convenient. Future public vehicles will be designed to contain more people as well as provide more convenient services. Therefore, people are likely to be attracted to using public transportation. Their experience will gradually increase over time.
Third, diesel cars are well-known for their harm on environment, thanks to the invention of electric car, more and more people are going to willing to choose it. Some people might argue electric cars which do not release any polluted gas, will be more accessible in the future. However, this is an untrue statement. The process of making electric car's battery is using a chemical which is limited and costly. Moreover, this procedure even more toxic than making a diesel car. Therefore, the environment lovers are likely to stay away from contributing into electric cars, not to mention diesel car.
In conclusion, I strongly support the statement that number of cars used in future will see a huge decrease. This is because of the improvement of public transportation system, vehicle and the raise in environment awareness.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decline'
Suggestion: decline
... in future the number of cars used will declined. Personally, I strongly agree with this...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22697368421 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8416312196 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8243224594 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.45 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255277645968 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883705647166 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589263718038 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158771971567 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419415534938 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decline'
Suggestion: decline
... in future the number of cars used will declined. Personally, I strongly agree with this...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22697368421 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8416312196 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8243224594 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.45 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255277645968 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883705647166 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589263718038 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158771971567 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419415534938 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.