It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for example for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taugh to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Each person was born with different talents such as sports and music, while others oppose this because several people consider that talents derived from endeavor and ultimately became a best athlete and musician. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Capability of someone commonly inharited by parrents. In other words, they were born from parrents with skills will flow in their blood, and enable to them for being a best athlete because of genetic factors. For instance, mozart is one of the most eminent composer in the world, his artistic get a lot of love from people and his intelligence about musician descended to his child. Thats why, factors of genetic have big impact to generating some talent and ability.
On the othet hand, someone without talents from ancestor or descendant have opportunities to being best athlete or musician. Moreover, people with big ambitious will found distinct ways such as learnt by book, internet, practice and exercise, with this methods their insight will be increasing and capability of them steadily advancing. As illustration, Kevin Sanjaya is badminton athlete from Indonesia, he became winner in many competition, his parrents not an athlete and he learnt about badminton by his own self and always exercise when he got spared time and he became athelete because Taufik Hidaya motivated him when he saw Taufik on contest and he decided to learnt by internet and practice with his coach. So, talents can born when someone became a dreamer.
To conclude, not all people with ability in sports and music field derived from genetics faktor, but talent also yielded from toil of someone. In my opinion, many strategic to became a good athlete and it is depend how the people using their ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ved from endeavor and ultimately became a best athlete and musician. I will exami...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eir blood, and enable to them for being a best athlete because of genetic factors...
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Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... about musician descended to his child. Thats why, factors of genetic have big impact...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the best'.
Suggestion: being the best
...tor or descendant have opportunities to being best athlete or musician. Moreover, people w...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., internet, practice and exercise, with this methods their insight will be increasin...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun competition seems to be countable; consider using: 'many competitions'.
Suggestion: many competitions
...ete from Indonesia, he became winner in many competition, his parrents not an athlete and he lea...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...egic to became a good athlete and it is depend how the people using their ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0724137931 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50532132837 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0665715444 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203184913847 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791812338762 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565045527177 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143086854358 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490366623073 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.