Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Arouse feeling of emulation in youngster should be pushed. The most important to generating youngster being good mature by creating teamwork among individuals. In my opinion, a combiniation of the two is the best way forward.
On the other hand, the youngster who get some knowledge about teamwork will be the good person in the future. For instance, all school in Indonesia have some extracurricular and many pupils interested with this exercise until they decided to join the club in their scholl such as volly club, basketball club, foot ballclub and each of the club, of course in some group consist of more than 5 pupils and in this club, the teacher have role to ensure all of the member have a feeling to helping each members that's mean to acheive their goal should be have the best teamwork. However, in some group will being controversy between pupils because someone sometimes want to be the best person in the group. Furthermore, feeling of want to be dominant than another members always come to all person even they consider that their self more competitive.
Soul of emulation in all youngster should be steadily emphasised. Indeed, to increasing capability of youngster must be accompanied by curious because from this strategy the youngster think how to make their self being win in some event. Therefore, environmental of youngster grow was very crucial to evolve their abilities.
To conclude, i believe that the best way to yields the best generation in future, ths youngster should be square up between emulation and teamwork.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, therefore, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00775193798 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71511558743 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.006121651 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128299859613 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573214552018 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265870185081 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078496170761 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154003763587 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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