The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, it is widely perceived that English is used as a global language more than ever before and may continue to outweigh its disadvantages. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with this position.
There are innumerable reasons why people might disapprove of its merits, one of which is losing a unique culture and also a own perception of the individual country. Furthermore, not only does the language embody an indirect way of showing the outside world the amazing ongoing society exists but it also plays a crucial part in the indigenous people’s lives. Therefore, the importance of the language belonging to a country is of inestimable value. For example, if Vietnam lost its own native tongue during countless wars in the past, it would not have survived until now. Another objection is that languages dying out make the world lose many rich and versatile lifelong countries. Since each has their own roles to fulfill the duties of decorating the traditional cultures life more exciting and amusing, the world culture becomes much more vibrant with their existences. Living without them is an unwanted desire, which would therefore create an unappreciated world not taking care of those languages, especially those endangered ones.
The merits of having English as a global language, however, are indisputable. First and foremost, it creates a world with no language barriers and no concerns to be worried about. Since everyone can have the same access to information and knowledge all around the world, there will be no shortages of meeting the requirements in developing a better cross-cultural community. For example, students in other countries can easily study abroad in English countries when the language is used the most in the daily lives. It should also be noted that using English as a global language may gain more benefits for the society.Due to speaking the same language, it may give more countries more affection toward each other by easily discussing a topic with no misunderstood. This would therefore tighten the relationship and lower the chance of opening a cold war for them.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that I do agree the advantages of spreading English as a global language do eclipse the disadvantages.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ich is losing a unique culture and also a own perception of the individual countr...
^
Line 2, column 767, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cultures'' or 'culture's'?
Suggestion: cultures'; culture's
...he duties of decorating the traditional cultures life more exciting and amusing, the wor...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
... may gain more benefits for the society.Due to speaking the same language, it may g...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17567567568 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89837742069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3447101864 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19500527247 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658823202748 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808562196254 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169243975206 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101572865007 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ich is losing a unique culture and also a own perception of the individual countr...
^
Line 2, column 767, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cultures'' or 'culture's'?
Suggestion: cultures'; culture's
...he duties of decorating the traditional cultures life more exciting and amusing, the wor...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
... may gain more benefits for the society.Due to speaking the same language, it may g...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17567567568 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89837742069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3447101864 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19500527247 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658823202748 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808562196254 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169243975206 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101572865007 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.