In modern era, advances in technology have revolutionized all aspects of humans’ lives dramatically. In other words, they have paved the way for gaining access to resources by which individuals can elevate their awareness and knowledge. In this regard, the inevitable question which has always caused heated debate among people is that whether it is more beneficial to take advantage of different people's viewpoints or the benefits of listening to those individuals whose perspectives are similar to our own carry more weight. From my vantage point, people should be open to different views and be able to apply their positive aspects in their lives. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The most significant point to be mentioned is that utilizing different views from our own provides individuals with the opportunity to broaden our perspective and understanding of the world. Accordingly, a ground-breaking study, which has been conducted in my hometown recently, revealed that those people who are capable of listening to different viewpoints and can criticize them are more likely to become successful people, as they are able to distinguish between unfounded and accurate news and just use the positive points of different views.
Another paramount reason which should be referred to is that reading news which includes diverse points of view from other views can bring about some positive characteristics. It is no secret that if people are exposed to different views, they will develop some advantageous features such as critical thinking. Moreover, such skills can culminate in individuals' future career success. Take a personal experience as an example, I used to have a friend who was interested in listening to various viewpoints about different fields. After a long time doing this, she developed critical thinking which helped her be fired by a prestigious company. If she had been exposed to different views, she would have been deprived of the life-altering career opportunity.
To recapitulate, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is important to take advantage of different viewpoints rather than listen to those people who have a specific line of thought, for it not only endows people with flourishing their perspective, but also it triggers some positive features which can come in useful in individuals’ future careers. As far as I am concerned, I recommend that individuals not concentrate on a certain viewpoint and be open to different visions.
- Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost 76
- Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups and all members of the group receive the same grade mark on the project Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement After completing high school students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another 76
- It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... elevate their awareness and knowledge. In this regard, the inevitable question wh...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...point and be open to different visions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33990147783 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09471756522 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539408866995 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1522292042 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.533333333 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0666666667 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193796387153 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594862089133 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619433999977 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126458127186 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304506563495 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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