The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.
Describe the information shown to a university or college lecturer.
Write at least 150 words
The bar graph illustrates the average working hours of eight professionals including writers, doctors, producers, programmers, businessmen, lawyers, chefs, and movie lecturers, in a week. While the pie chart describes the percentage of stress-related illnesses.
Overall, businessmen worked more hours in a week amongst others however the stress level is compared to lower than the lecturers who worked less amount of time in a week.
Over to the bar graph, business people worked above 70 hours a week in contrast to lecturers with below 25 hours. The working hours of Doctors and movie producers are 50 and 60 hours a week respectively. Moreover, all other professionals are working below 45 hours a week.
Regarding the pie chart depicts, lecturers have the highest level of stress-related illness with 25% compared to businessmen with 11%. The programmers have the lowest level a mere 5%. Furthermore, movie producers and doctors account for 18% and 15% respectively. In addition, lawyers and writers represent 8% and chefs have 5% stress related illness in the given period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... chefs, and movie lecturers, in a week. While the pie chart describes the percentage ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eek. Regarding the pie chart depicts, lecturers have the highest level of stre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0529340443 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0251089481 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253315118614 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100790704974 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469152775959 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159538534685 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319044648648 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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