There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Transport Manager,
Hope you are doing well.
I, Sharmistha Naskar, am writing this letter to inform you regarding recent reliability issue with the bus service from the east-south bus route i.e. from station Garia to eco space.
Let me explain my issues in detailed here. I am a regular traveler of this route since this is the only route which leads to my office location . So, I have no other choice to pick as an alternative way to commute to the distination. Hence, I have to inform regarding the inconvenience in very brief manner.
Since last 2 weeks, I am facing bus timing issue majorly. I had to stand under the hot sun & feel the heat wave for long time. Last week I had to take decision to book a cab to reach at the desire location which was not affordable at all in compare to bus fare. Post that I experienced the similar issue, so I had to look for other way to reach to ecospace. Therefore, this becomes a big reliability issue for me as well as for other passenger. Hope you understand my situation.
I would like to request the tranport company, to launch an app to track the bus though GPS system so that we can be aware of bus position and avilability. Accordingly, we can leave our house to save out time as well as money.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...re doing well. I, Sharmistha Naskar, am writing this letter to inform you regar...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... route which leads to my office location . So, I have no other choice to pick as a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49372384937 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55568651207 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6749325134 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139865045949 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040648629487 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463094431346 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598962084589 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551574217168 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.