There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
This is to inform you that there has been frequent irregularity of public bus transport facilities in my area for last 2 weeks.
The nearest junction to my home is a popular spot to catch regular public transport during office hours. Accordingly, I follow the same route to reach to desire destination. For last 2 weeks, folks are experiencing reliability issues with public bus timing due to huge traffic and metro construction work. People are waiting for long time. At the last minute, they either booking cabs or shuttle which is far expensive than bus fare.
Eventually, all these are resulting several issues that affecting daily life. For example, office going people are getting late on most of the days. Those who have plans to visit doctors, can not reach on time. Students are getting late who don't avail school buses.
I would like to suggest an idea to get rid of this issue easily. Transport department could introduce app & install GPS devices to the buses. This way people could easily track and catch the early available bus as or when required.
Hope you like my idea. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your's faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... on time. Students are getting late who dont avail school buses. I would like to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46233206842 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70202020202 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6858186037 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126680826099 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385510778161 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044172254535 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653699060771 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396470220813 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.