a groupe of people like to spend money rather save it. why they do this? what are the avantages and disadvantages?
Some humans believe in consuming each and every penny they have instead of saving it. This essay will discuss reason behind the logic to consume all the money
along with its advantages and disadvantages.
There are certain people who prefer spending cash rather than securing it. The main reason behind this thinking is that they want to enjoy their life to the fullest.
They believe that we have only one life and if one is capable to fulfil all their wishes then why should he limit himself. For example, a recent survey has shown
that in India most of the celebrities are living a luxurious life because they are aware once their popularity dimishes they wont be able to make enough money to
accomplish all their dreams.
There are few advantages to utilize funds which are happiness and satisfaction. The main aim of a person should be to live a happy life. Although saving money is
extremely important, but the most vital thing is to obtain happiness. If a man has thousands of dollars in his bank account but he is not satisfied then what is the
purpose of this money. In addition, if people are getting satisfied by spending cash, then nothing matters. To explain further, some people are brand consious and for
them it is a style statement which they have to pertain for their self satisfaction. For instance, designers in Pakistan would never stop buying high end bags as it
will fullfil their self esteem.
In addition to advantages, there are some disadvantages of not saving up such as unemployment and medical situations. Unmployment is the main issue these days so one
should always be prepared for the worst situations. Hence, storing funds can be beneficial as one may be able support his family during critical times. If money is
rarely saved then in difficult situations one might face unbearable consequences. For example, most of the artists in Middle East enjoy their life during the prime years of their career but
in old age they have to seek help from the government to provide them medical assistance.
In conclusion, there are citizens of believe in spending to enjoy their life. Although the advantages of consuming money are to achieve happiness and satisfaction, but
on the other hand there are some disadvantages such as unemployment and medical situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95897435897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64476210668 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5196507339 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206821121797 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627606383375 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434670188682 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06125921008 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525270896006 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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