Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree.
It is often commented that Guardians are the best tutors. I agree with said notion and will discuss my points in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with the view of agreement, firstly, precreators provide the essential knowledge to their toddlers. To explicate it, after the birth and before going to school, the time inwhich juveniles spend with their parents and that time they obtain all basic knowledge from their ancestor such as how to eat, how to bath, how to speak and many more activities. For example, a survey was conducted by department of primary schools was revealed that 90% of pupils in playway were already familiar with words which they were used with their mentors. Thus, This imported knowledge which they acquire from their parents would be most helpful when they will go to outerworld.
Furthermore, The parents teach adults about their culture in better way in comparison of all others.To elaborate it, The teacher teach the mentees according their syllabus, so, they gain impressive results in prospective their schools. The culture related and moral habits is developed by only parents in offsprings. For epitome, ' The Moscow Times ' newspaper published a interview of chairperson of NGO who told the inspiration of helping the poor masses got from my family. As a result, parents play important role to build the personality of their youngers.
In conclusion, parents not only give startup knowledge but also attach them with culture and moral values.
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- Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is this positive or negative development 56
- Parents are the best teacher Do you agree or disagree 56
- Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is this positive or negative development 56
- Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is this positive or negative development 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61107417232 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9936373542 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104027832105 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452322905249 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316076537383 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720195053091 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303326027743 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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