The given line graph depicts how the statistics for the transportation of goods in the UK by four different types of transport changed, over a 28-year period, commencing from 1974.
Overall, the except for rail, which stayed the same, all categories experienced an upward trend over the period shown. Throughout the period of 28 years, the pipeline was constantly receiving the lowest figures, the opposite was true for the road.
Road recorded the highest number at the beginning of the period with 70 million tonnes. Over the next 28 years, there was a gradual increase to nearly 100 million tonnes. Meanwhile, the pipeline witnessed the lowest number with five million tonnes. In 1982, the number of goods transported by pipeline rose significantly to approximately 30 million tonnes. During the 20-year period, commencing from 1982, the figures for pipeline fluctuated around ten million tonnes.
Turning to the statistics for water and rail, they came in second and third place in 1974, with 40 and approximately 40 million tonnes. Throughout the period of 28 years, figures for water showed a remarkable increase to roughly 70 million tonnes. Likewise, the transportation of rail did not change too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, third, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358974359 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77405088578 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2055303427 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155513729754 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066600462407 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113113068574 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132665867167 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155618811046 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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