The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
The rapid development of the Internet creates many problems for users. However, there are some solutions to solve these Internet-related issues. This essay will list the problems and recommend proper solutions for these concerns.
The Internet quickly becomes everyone's need, but it also generates many problems affecting users. The first problem is that people may accidentally approach false information online; therefore, inaccurate news might manipulate their awareness and swindle their money. In Vietnam, for example, many people believed in a charlatan promoting his own “magical medicine that can cure all diseases” on YouTube; thus, they lost a profit by buying fake medicine. Moreover, Internet addiction turns users into fat people because they rely too much on online platforms for entertainment and reduce the time for exercise. According to a study by Nutrition, the most frequent Internet users have nearly 50% higher chance of obesity than people that use the Internet normally.
Although the problems are severe, there are many solutions to solve them. With the first problem, the government should warn Internet users against fake news or unsecured websites. Moreover, the users need to raise their awareness to distinguish between reliable information and false information to protect their privacy and money. With the second problem, people should set a limited time for Internet use and participate in more outdoor activities to keep their attention off their phones. Furthermore, people should go to the gym to exercise to have a healthy body instead of eating chips and surfing the Internet all day.
In conclusion, widespread Internet use can cause many problems related to people’s awareness and health, but there are solutions to these concerns. To limit privacy invasion and money fraud, people need to distinguish between real and fake news. Moreover, people can prevent obesity by limiting the time spent on the Internet and exercising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51644736842 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72647763884 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9695087373 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26664330602 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107736650363 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788899909696 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188982961626 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01833947659 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.