The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
The rapid development of the Internet creates many problems for users. However, there are some solutions to solve these Internet-related issues. This essay will list the problems and recommend proper solutions to these concerns.
The Internet quickly becomes everyone's need, but it also generates many problems affecting users. Firstly, people are likely to approach false information online, which could manipulate their awareness. In Vietnam, for example, many people believed in a charlatan promoting his own "magical medicine that can cure all diseases" on Youtube; thus, they lost a profit by buying fake medicine. Moreover, Internet addiction turns users into fat people because the Internet reduce the time for exercise by attracting people to use it all day. According to a study by Nutrition, the most frequent Internet users have a higher chance of obesity than people that use the Internet normally.
Although the problems are severe, there are many solutions to solve them. With the first problem, the government should warn Internet users against fake news or unsecured websites. Moreover, the users need to secure their awareness in order to distinguish between reliable information and false information to protect their privacy and money. With the second problem, people should set a limited time for Internet use and participate in more outdoor activities to keep their attention off their phones. Furthermore, people should go to the gym to exercise to have a healthy body instead of eating chips and surfing the Internet all day.
In conclusion, widespread Internet use can cause many problems related to people’s awareness and health, but there are solutions to these concerns. To limit privacy invasion and money fraud, people need to distinguish between real and fake news. Moreover, people can prevent obesity by limiting the time spent on the Internet and exercising.
- The diagrams show changes in a student common room 78
- With the pressures on today s young people to succeed academically some people believe that non academic subjects at school eg physical education and cookery should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects 61
- As machines have become more sophisticated more and more jobs and tasks involving physical hard work can be done automatically Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects 67
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd proper solutions to these concerns. The Internet quickly becomes everyones n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople that use the Internet normally. Although the problems are severe, there ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hips and surfing the Internet all day. In conclusion, widespread Internet use c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44256756757 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75718523101 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6899488109 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280369971335 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111384841998 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803470073754 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19633397914 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127810207823 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.