In today's modern era, Technology has wondrously influenced every sphere of life .A dramatic change is noticed in transportation field and there is a possibility that we would be blessed with automatic vehicles that would not have any need of drivers. This Trend would have countless advantages despite of handful of disadvantages. This essay will explain the merits along with few demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost benefit of driveless vehicles is less economic .To be precise, government would not have any need to hire drivers to drive vehicles which would save huge amount of tax collected money of people that could be used to provide better education and basic health facilities to its citizens. Meanwhile, there would also be no need to organise seminar to provide training to drivers.Moreover ,there would also be less possibility of accidents which most often occurs due to negligence of drivers .To exemplify 60% of road accidents happened due to drunk drivers and over speed is also responsible for 20% accident on roads .Thus, the automatic vehicles would play a major role for the safety of passengers .
On the other hand , the driveless cars buses would have some cons also. These vehicles maybe totally technology based and if any problem occurs then it would be difficult for passengers to find it that would have less chances in the case of drivers. furthermore ,this trend will also increase crimes in society which will be the directresult of unemployment .To illustrate,employed drivers would loss their jobs due to self drive vehicles that would bring chaos in society as unemploy drivers would indulge themselves in anti social activities to earn their livelihood. Thus,unemployment would put catastrophic impact on the lives of drivers
To conclude ,although driveless vehicles has few disadvantages yet its advantages outweigh the disadvantages if they are concerned with safety along with the spending of government money to full fill the basic needs of its people.
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In today's modern era,…
In today's modern era, Technology has wondrously influenced every sphere of life .A dramatic change is noticed in transportation field and there is a possibility that we would be blessed with highly automated vehicles in future . This Trend would have countless advantages despite of handful of disadvantages. This essay will explain the merits along with few demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost benefit of driveless vehicles is related to benefits of society .To be precise, government would not have any need to hire drivers to which will save huge amount of tax collected money of people that could be used to provide better education and basic health facilities to its citizens.Moreover ,there would also be less possibility of accidents which most often occurs due to negligence of drivers .To exemplify 60% of road accidents happen due to drunk drivers and over speed is also responsible for 20% accident on roads .Thus, the automatic vehicles would play a crucial role in regard to the safety of passengers .
On the other hand , the driveless cars buses would have some drawbacks also. These vehicles may be totally technology based .Hence, if they would not be updated frequently,then people of newly located areas would have to face difficulty. furthermore ,this trend will also gives birth to an enhancement of crimes in society which will be the direct result of unemployment .To illustrate,unemployed drivers would bring chaos in society as they would indulge themselves in anti -social activities to earn their livelihood. Thus,unemployment would bring catastrophic changes in the lives of drivers .
To conclude ,although driveless vehicles has few disadvantages yet its advantages can not be ignored as they are related with safety as well as proper utilisation of people hard earned money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22629969419 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95892246319 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.522919957 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.888888889 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180778574941 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838099591214 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322112170587 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113538585989 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225068080638 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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