People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.
What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Sleep deprivation occurs when human bodies consistently lack quality nap time resulting from various factors regarding the overload of work as well as the distraction caused by technology. In fact, this phenomenon is becoming more prevalent currently and is bringing about severe consequences in terms of degrading individuals’ health and causing tragic accidents.
Generally speaking, there are several problems contributing to the shortage of sleep that most people are suffering from, namely the occupied lifestyle and other entertaining tools from technological advancement. Firstly, an immense number of white-collar workers are relatively working in a competitive and high-demanding environment, which requires them to give in huge efforts on duty and even work overtime to get the job done on time. This real state of affairs prevents employees from accomplishing a healthily balanced schedule, especially prohibiting them from getting sufficient sleep. Secondly, along with the rise in entertaining platforms widely accessible on the Internet, people are often captivated by these advanced technologies that can take away the day’s fatigue and therefore lose track of time.
Unfortunately, such lack of resting hours can bring about numerous inevitable consequences including the state of poor health and the prompts of traffic injuries. It is evident that our bodies go into recovery mode during the deepest phases of sleeping, which promotes better mental and physical performance for the next day. Thus, being deprived of sleep will result in productivity and efficiency deterioration, especially at work. Furthermore,the percentage of severe incidents caused by reckless driving is taking some big leaps since people are constantly exhausted and incapable of concentrating when commuting. Such an issue poses serious threats not only to drivers themselves himself but also to other passengers.
In conclusion, it is not advisable that many workers are obliged to work longer nowadays and that people are often more keen on online entertainment since they lose the opportunities to fully get rest at night. This arising problem might affect humans’ health both mentally and physically and can even cause severe accidents to any drivers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 965.302439024 200% => OK
No of words: 337.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71810089021 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09577332569 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 106.607317073 209% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661721068249 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 283.868780488 212% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2221710035 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.230769231 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111055653444 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364211449412 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286246004232 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06647242598 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249973705609 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 40.7170731707 292% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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