When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
finding information about the problem using the Internet
taking a long time to think about the problem
Use specific details and examples in your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
People usually meet problems in their lives, most people would like to solve it for finding information online or taking a long time to think about the problem. However, I personally prefer asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when people face problems some of them are likely to find their friends or family to ask for help. Because this is an effective and efficiency method to talk one’s personal situation directly to someone who have more experience and have abilities to help. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I graduated from college, I worked for an ads company as an account executive. I worked twelve hours per day, and due to the lack of sleep, I was exhausted and sick frequently. Therefore, I started to hate my job and wanted to quit. I was lost in my future career, and did not know what to do next if I quit my job. After a few days, I contacted with my friend Allen, who had plenty of working experiences and was willing to help. After consulting with Allen, I found my interests and planned a new career path with a decent salaries, so I decided to quit my job in ads company and tried to apply a new position as a product manager. Now, I really like my job as a PM, thanks to Allen for sharing his own experience with me.
On the other hand, some people argue that it is better to find information online to solve the problem without bothering others. What is more, other people would say that it is also good for people to take a long time to think the problem by themselves, because other people can not understand you at all. However, I personally think both of methods wasting time and not effective because both of them can not fix the problem immediately. For instance, my friend Alice, when she graduated from university, she found a job without consulting any experienced friends. After three months, she realized that she did not suitable for this job. But she still did not ask anyone for advice, and she wasted tons of time to interview different jobs in order to find an ideal occupation. Now, she has changed ten jobs, but still can not find her interest.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that asking people with more experience for advice is the best way to solve the problem. This is because it is effective and efficient to ask others for help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le usually meet problems in their lives, most people would like to solve it for f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom college, I worked for an ads company as an account executive. I worked twelve...
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Line 3, column 859, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'salary'?
Suggestion: salary
...planned a new career path with a decent salaries, so I decided to quit my job in ads com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55429864253 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49713601026 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490950226244 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9338546939 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22727272727 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352147209679 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106592740741 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124863608536 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274516295718 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13555653783 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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