In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disavantages?
It is agrued that in the past information was stored in physical books, but nowadays knowledge is uploaded to the internet. From my point of view, both notions have its own benefits and drawback with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world globle internet, modern technology are hugely significant for the social. Not only dose it help individuals life more convenience, but also citizens can be stored the numerous of attractive information, course and academic knowledge from a wide range of sources. Furthermore, teenagers can be easier for sharing the value knowledge to their tutor, homeie and their relationship friends. To illustrate, though internet the youngs generation can know more international friends, they can learn a various new things such as aboad cutural. However, people nowadays are too depend on the intertet, lacking their independent, creative and a plenty of traditional value.
On the other hand, the individual can be inproved their ability, mind and mentally by reading physical book which contained deether knowledge. Moreover, books were reserved and kept the historic value, academic books and interesting knowledge, transmitting from older generation. In the nagative aspect, it is more difficul to share it with other, if it were a hard copy such as books related to your field of work or sicence thesis.
To conclude, by my agrument of these essay both statement have advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each situation, so people need to have bright plan to use the internet in the positive way for the development of their nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is agrued that in the past informatio...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ficant for the social. Not only dose it help individuals life more convenience, but ...
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Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...l friends, they can learn a various new things such as aboad cutural. However, people ...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to depend'?
Suggestion: to depend
...d cutural. However, people nowadays are too depend on the intertet, lacking their independ...
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Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...tural. However, people nowadays are too depend on the intertet, lacking their independ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve and a plenty of traditional value. On the other hand, the individual can be...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your field of work or sicence thesis. To conclude, by my agrument of these ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27443609023 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87072602233 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0151564127 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201196991621 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713718577755 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912723959043 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11019381534 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619994706811 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is agrued that in the past informatio...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ficant for the social. Not only dose it help individuals life more convenience, but ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...l friends, they can learn a various new things such as aboad cutural. However, people ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to depend'?
Suggestion: to depend
...d cutural. However, people nowadays are too depend on the intertet, lacking their independ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...tural. However, people nowadays are too depend on the intertet, lacking their independ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve and a plenty of traditional value. On the other hand, the individual can be...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your field of work or sicence thesis. To conclude, by my agrument of these ess...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27443609023 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87072602233 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0151564127 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201196991621 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713718577755 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912723959043 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11019381534 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619994706811 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.