The time people devote to the job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?
Work-life harmony has always been a burning issue in the workforce, as the overwhelming workload and pressurizing time issues cause many people to delve too deep into their work and ignore other aspects of their life. The worldwide tendency and spread of this issue have been raising many eyebrows due to the various social concerns it is associated with. In the following essay, I will discuss the detriments of this problem on our society to lead to a feasible conclusion.
First and foremost, socially speaking, the disruption in the balance of a workman's life will cause a downturn in his social credibility. This could be due to the anxiety about his job for different reasons that might lead to the need for additional focus on their occupations. Because of that, the reallocation of his time and effort is required, and the lack of participation for other purposes in his life can be a burden on his relationships, leading to fractures and damages, possibly permanent.
In addition to that, increasing attachment to the working table might cause a myriad of health problems, both physically and mentally. For instance, according to many surveys, reasons for hospitalization by many senior workers are reported to originate from their unhealthy work-life. Long, continuous periods exposed to signal and wave computers will cause headaches and myopia, and a long time spent sitting or remaining in one setting, as many work environments exhibit, can lead to an increased probability of diseases such as diabetes or skeletal pains.
In the end, the welfare of a person's personal and professional life are both crucial to his happiness, and a disbalance in the equilibrium will cause adverse effects and should be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13120567376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95209518011 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4521413355 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234149900251 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840702289552 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352813887806 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13367415009 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229782418079 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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