These days, more and more people are going to other countries for a significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
People tend to have contradicting opinions on moving to a foreign nation for employment, which has its own set of benefits as well as corresponding problems. The forthcoming paragraphs outline the pros and cons associated with the trend of people migrating for foreign employment.
Moving to a foreign nation helps people gain a newer perspective, while having better opportunities which aren’t available in there native country. When an person migrates to a newer place, he/she gets exposed to a newer culture and lifestyle than the one accustomed to, thus can develop an unique way to navigate through life. Moreover, different nations have their own specialties and rates of development, so having opportunities in a certain field are concentrated to certain areas rather than being spread out evenly. If a person wants to work in the forefront for field of liking, it is unlikely to be achieved sitting in the comfort of a native land requiring him to move into the global hub.
On the other hand, living in a foreign land is not always rainbows and sunshine but comes with a plethora of problems. Firstly, taking a decision to migrate comes with the burden of leaving your comfort zone and the support of your friends and family, the decision alone causes much emotional distress to a person, while being in the such situation is much detrimental. Furthemore, in most cases migrating to a newer life means starting over from scratch, from finding new friendships to learning a new set of language. This poses a huge challenge as people are required to unlearn everything they have learnt throught their past just to fit in to the newer lifestyle.
Taking everything in consideration, going to a foreign country brings newer experiences and better opportunities, in the mean time posses a challenge of fitting fitting into a newer lifestyle. This blend of pros and cons are though highly dependent on the adaptability of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04968944099 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89891154217 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5403605476 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095646613159 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380513782012 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276041306229 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639048870321 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261014406176 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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