Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required.
Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?
The rapid spread of contagious diseases has made life in most parts of the world harder. Though medications for most communicable diseases, causing serious issues in third-world nations, are available readily around the developed countries, the countries with poor economies have become victims of the inability to afford proper medication. I strongly believe that drug companies should come to aid these problems by reducing the prices of their products in the countries facing such problems.
First of all, the healthcare system should be underpriced, if not free, as proper healthcare is a primary right of a person, which no one should be deprived of. Medications when available freely, the life expectancy of the people will increase as well as the number of people dying due to poverty be reduced. The increase in the life expectancy of Bulgaria after the provision of free medicines exemplifies how reducing the cost of healthcare aids the problem.
Moreover, the reduction in the cost would not only aid the general population but endorse business for the drug companies as well. Reducing the prices affects the number of units sold for the drug, which will help the businesses in return. For instance, a 30% growth in the sales of paracetamol in Nepal was seen due to the reduction of the prices by only 10 percent.
Summing things up, prices of medical products are not only beneficial to the burning issue of affordable healthcare in many countries but assist in the growth in the business of the drug companies as well. Thus, reducing the prices of medications and healthcare system is third-world countries is an optimal solution to prevent mass hysteria in my opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, third, thus, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1119133574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77166990725 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4783853641 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288497555842 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105121735796 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090204376772 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168182994691 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847473645085 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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