As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who can’t afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that housing is a fundanental required for individuals, the citizens should be provided free housing by the governmnet who can not afford this. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits for the people life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern technology individuals have become busier, so housing is significant for the individual development. Not only do housing improve they more confident and independent, but also being motivation and inspriration to each person to more concentrate for developing their career. Furthermore, the percentage of homeless people can be reduced graduately by government's supported, improving the economic development. To illustrate, there was a survey by Rockter, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of individuals in New York who have their own house. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has got a plenty of achevement in their occupation.
However, we can not negate the drawbacks of this problem for the adolesece. Numerous teenagers depend too much on the goverment, so people will be lazier. Moreover, the social-evil can not be avoided by bad people such as nicotine, drugs and other types of addicted, harmful influence will be lead by this problem, lacking for the individuals life and nation development
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect. The state need to have clear plans to improve the human life and the development of their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20676691729 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9328151711 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1160330455 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276107447261 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948175706283 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972385748697 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156027762564 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973400484535 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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