The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Nowaday, all around the world the internet is used as a source of information and interaction. However, it's often controversial, so some people belive that it need to be controlled, but on other aspect, many people advide there should be no disturbing whatsoever. In my oppinion, boths points of view have benefits and drawbacks with each person. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
On the one hand, when the internet is controversial, this can help the citizen avoid to scams and violent thought some website like facebook, zalo or snapchat. And also goverment can be easier to control the necessary safe of the citizen. Furthermore, it provide and give the best informations for the human which have been confirmed. following that, teenagers and all people around the world can be more confident and relaxation for getting news knowledge. For instance, the youngs will not worry about the news in the internet anymore and that can be a reason for them to get more knowledge in the internet. In addition, this trend also have some disadvantage for the human, it make the internet become boring, cramped and restrained thann before.
On the other hand, resident can free for creative and making everything they want. this things will help them fell more relaxation and comfortable after the hard time at school or at company. Moreover, citizen can free and independent to share with their friends, family or their teach the interesting knowledge, follow that, people can improve their knowledge and their life is better than before. In the nagative aspect, if there are not have controversial of goverment, the fake new will appear that make the citizen who use internet more panic and fear. For instance, at the covid 19 pandemic, there are have a lot of tabloid on some webside. this trend will make people more worry and also it hard for goverment control the social.
To conclude, the internet controlversial or no interference whatsoever have their own advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each person, so goverment need to have the bright choice to help people's improvement and better than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05099150142 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72518007201 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518413597734 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9334890986 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.882352941 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235722583689 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795317040619 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901768495748 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173621093067 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122135052044 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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