purchasing branded valuables such as clothes, cars, and others is the in thing at the moment due to the way people want to show statutes of themselves being opulent. While I think that this is an optimistic development, I would discuss both the pros and cons of it.
Firstly, in terms of the positive side, if people buy branded clothes such as a renowned corporation like Nike, Adidas, Puma, Gucci, they would feel proud of themselves because, from other people's eyes, they look stylish and wealthy. Studies by WTO shows that the people who have branded items, they tend to reduce stress and give oneself a satisfaction. Therefore, it is common that many people even youngers wear clothes or bags with popular branded names on it. Besides, not only the citizens can benefit from it, but the nations as well. This is because the country can increase its economy.
However, when we look at the negative side, people want to follow or mimic the popular famous stars, and they would wear whatever the celebrities are using. As a matter of fact, people tend to fall back to debts because they have to pay a huge sum of money to buy a branded product. Additionally, they might commit crimes or robbers to steal money for that purpose. For example, if you want to buy a Ferrari car enthusiastically but you don't have sufficient money, you would steal money from other people to achieve the thing you want to get. To support this, research by the Department of Police proves that the rate of crimes have increased and the reason for that was to buy expensive things that they could not afford.
In conclusion, owning things that are pricey can improve people's lifestyles by pressuring the things they bought. But it goes without saying that we should never forget the negative consequences it has on ourselves.
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purchasing branded valuables…
purchasing branded valuables such as clothes, cars, and others is the in thing at the moment due to the way people want to show statutes of themselves being opulent. While I think that this is an optimistic development, I would discuss both the pros and cons of it.
Firstly, in terms of the positive side, if people buy branded clothes such as a renowned corporation like Nike, Adidas, Puma, Gucci, they would feel proud of themselves because, from other people's eyes, they look stylish and wealthy. Studies by WTO shows that the people who have branded items, they tend to reduce stress and give oneself a satisfaction. Therefore, it is common that many people even youngers wear clothes or bags with popular branded names on it. Besides, not only the citizens can benefit from it, but the nations as well. This is because the country can increase its economy.
However, when we look at the negative side, people want to follow or mimic the popular famous stars, and they would wear whatever the celebrities are using. As a matter of fact, people tend to fall back to debts because they have to pay a huge sum of money to buy a branded product. Additionally, they might commit crimes or robbers to steal money for that purpose. For example, if you want to buy a Ferrari car enthusiastically but you don't have sufficient money, you would steal money from other people to achieve the thing you want to get. To support this, research by the Department of Police proves that the rate of crimes have increased and the reason for that was to buy expensive things that they could not afford.
In conclusion, owning things that are pricey can improve people's lifestyles by pressuring the things they bought. But it goes without saying that we should never forget the negative consequences it has on ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Purchasing
purchasing branded valuables such as clothes, cars...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... a Ferrari car enthusiastically but you dont have sufficient money, you would steal ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77388535032 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4901465114 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8700439557 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30668348411 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883174944416 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600632404768 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157148596507 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744457606574 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.