the payment by British parents on their children's favorite sport from 2008 to 2014
The line graphs below illustrate the payment by British parents on their children's favorite sport from 2008 to 2014 and the line chart depicts the total of children participating in three different sports in Britain over the same duration. It is clear that an upward trend was seen in the ordinary monthly spend on children’s sport. For the participation in three diverse sports, the amount of children in football and swimming had an increasing trend in 6 years, while athletics had a huge jump over the 6 years period.
As regards average monthly expenditure on children’s sportsport, it started at 20 in 2008 and then increased slightly to 25 in 2010, before ascending continually to over 30 in 4 years after. Additionally, the increase in spending in 2 years was substantial, followed by the gradual growth in the next 4 years.
The statistics of children in 3 kinds of sport were very different from the graph above. As you can see, the number of children in football began at 7,5 in 2008.This figure, which saw a slight decrease in the next 2 years and grew steadily to over 8 in 2012 after sinked a little in 2010, reached the highest point at nearly 9 in 2014. Regarding the amount of children learning swimming was under 2,5, followed by a gradual increase from 2010 to 2014. While the amount of children in athletics was different from the others figure, it had a big jump in the period of 2010 and 2012, before finishing at under 5 and over the figure for swimming.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ildren in football began at 7,5 in 2008.This figure, which saw a slight decrease in ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...garding the amount of children learning swimming was under 2,5, followed by a gradual in...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70498084291 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7136662791 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3294572333 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.444444444 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331646258157 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138790530829 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150569086746 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213207808606 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135986044253 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ildren in football began at 7,5 in 2008.This figure, which saw a slight decrease in ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...garding the amount of children learning swimming was under 2,5, followed by a gradual in...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70498084291 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7136662791 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3294572333 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.444444444 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331646258157 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138790530829 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150569086746 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213207808606 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135986044253 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.