A friend has told you she feels lonely in their new city away from their family write your friend
Explain why people can feel this way
Give some ideas on how to solve this problem
Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works
Dear Sara,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling rather lonely since you have moved to Colombo.
People feel isolated for a variety of reasons. The main reason for this is they think they have no one to talk to and nothing to do. I also felt the feeling of loneliness when i when to my uncle's house. I think we've already talked about this when we were doing homework the other day.
As you have always been a social butterfly i can help you out by giving some amazing tips to tackle this issue. Firstly, whenever you get bored or feel like alone, try to socialise with your neighbours and contact with me and our gang .but be careful because you might have a chance to fall in with wrong crowd. Moreover, I forgot to tell one key method which is going out. If I were you , the first thing I would do is to do widow shopping, spending some time near beaches and parks , which surely help to unwind. Do you remember when we were kids we loved soaking up the atmosphere of beaches . So I'm hoping if you do these it will definitely alleviate the level of loneliness and anxiety.
I believe you will do these tips that I told you to do so and let me know how it worked out .you can call me from your aunt's phone if you can since you haven't bought a new phone yet.
Take care and keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Sayi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sara, Im sorry to hear that youre feeling rather lonely since you have mo...
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... were doing homework the other day. As you have always been a social butterfly...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...zing tips to tackle this issue. Firstly, whenever you get bored or feel like alon...
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...ghbours and contact with me and our gang .but be careful because you might have a...
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...e to fall in with wrong crowd. Moreover, I forgot to tell one key method which is...
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... care and keep in touch. Best wishes, Sayi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2371541502 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06355027709 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6722662946 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287552638892 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844107241838 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740777261149 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145941553839 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088236718526 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.