Mrs paratt an English speaking women who lives in your town.has, advertised for someone to help her on her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs parrett
Suggest how to could help her In her home
Say why you would like to do this work
Explain when you will and will not be available
I am writing with regard to the advertisement that you have posted.
As I have worked as a laborer for about 10 years, I can help with anything, for example, sweeping the floors, cooking, and doing laundry. In addition, I am also working as a caregiver at the moment. So, if you need any assistance with taking care of the baby, I would happily do that too.
Actually, I am about to leave my job due to the distance, which takes approximately two hours to reach the destination. Because of the convenience, I would be interested in joining household work. Not only for this reason, but I also consider myself very suitable applicant with experience.
If you feel eligible for the work you mentioned above, i would kindly request that you can contact me on my phone number, which is 0789077722. Unfortunately, I will not be available on the weekends as I am a caregiver on weekdays. I hope it will be fine with you.
I am looking forward to hearing your answer.
kind regards,
Kavitha mohan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this reason, but I also consider myself very suitable applicant with experience....
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gible for the work you mentioned above, i would kindly request that you can conta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly request that you can contact me on my phone number, which is 0789077722. Unfor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kind
...king forward to hearing your answer. kind regards, Kavitha mohan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, for example, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73446327684 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8666401661 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3474743124 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143126311833 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478920427591 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387803366242 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775015489854 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328846495411 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.