In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Automation of modern transportation is an obvious trend and passengers will experience no-driver vehicles. However, I suppose this may result in more drawbacks than merits.
To commence, without human supervision, automatic vehicles pose a large quantity of threats rather than safety. Precisely, driverless vehicles are merely the invention of human beings, and the possibility of having unexpected technological bugs can not be completely eliminated. Therefore, incidents may suddenly occur while in operation, leading to several devastating consequences. Consecutive deadly traffic accidents caused by Tesla automatic cars in the USA are the most prominent examples, which also aroused concerns about the safety of artificial intelligence in general.
Moreover, the absence of drivers could be a contributor to the service failure in the area of public transportation or taxi market. In hospitality, robots or AI devices can not substitute the emotional function of servants. As a result, the overuse of automazation may render the unwarmed feelings in passengers, which can eventually create negative impacts on the aforementioned sectors. For instance, Vietnamese passengers usually have a great number of conversations with the taxi drivers when they use the service, and this unique culture may gradually fade away, as well as the customers may feel less cared for if the automatic cars are brought into use on a large scale.
In conclusion, I suppose that the development in the phenomenon of non-driver vehicles pose certain threats to the society and the use of such modern tools should be limited to an acceptable threshold
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58634538153 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18096628009 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7412885296 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122298269413 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415416876836 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046619638599 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709012744039 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318662220272 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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