The diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane
The diagram illustrates how sugar is made from its initial form of sugar cane. Overall, the process consists of 7 steps, beginning with nurturing fresh sugar canes and ending with the complete sugar product.
After around 12 to 18 months of growing sugar cane, they are harvested by both modern harvesters and traditional method by farmers. After that, sugar cane juice is collected through a process of crushing and squeezing in the cane mills.
The juice then will be purified by using a clean limestone filter, followed by being evaporated in a specialized tool using high-temperature heat to make the syrup liquid. In the next stage, a centrifuge is responsible for the removal of sugar crystals from the collected syrup and most lumps of sugar are mainly created in this stage. The final stages in the process include hydrating and cooling the sugar crystals. From there, sugar will be packaged and sold into the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02580645161 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60986681397 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9703831953 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442767319853 0.216113520407 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199084397136 0.0766984524023 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994266333336 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296621597899 0.12726935374 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865557079003 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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