The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010

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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The diagram compares the proportion of female and male residents of an Asian territory who managed to achieve a driving license from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it can be obviously seen that the figures for both genders had an upward trend, additionally, the data for women was higher than that for men throughout the examined years.
Looking at the statistics of female citizens, roughly 48% was recorded in 1980 and there was an increase tendency in the following years. 2000 saw the largest climb in numbers when approximately 68% of contestants passed the test. However, a remarkable decline occurred in 2010 and the data slightly dropped to around 64%.
Regarding the male dwellers, the figures develops in a more steady way, from only around 38% in 1980 to just under 50% in 2010 and the data had leveled off since then. 2000 was also the year that recorded the most significant growth of roughly 13%. Interestingly, percentage of men passing the test wá lower than that of women for around 20% in all four years.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85142857143 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58633141807 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2127462718 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188085241108 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781179857739 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632700132712 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122646721179 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139033798306 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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