The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans illustrate the site of Southwest Airport today and how it will be redeveloped next year.

In general, the airport will become modernized by the following year. Some modifications are including providing new amenities to passengers, constructing a sky train for jetway and extending the number of available planes.

At present day, the airport is separated into two halls, one for departures and the other for arrivals. Passengers to depart can inform at check-in and rest at the café before passing the security passport control. However, in arrival hall, there are only passport control customs but no facilities. There are altogether 8 gates which are accessed by a walkway to different airlines.

According to the redevelopment plan, the basic building design will not change. The doors for both departures and arrivals are set to be increased from 2 to 4. New facilities such as bag-drop, car hire and ATM machines will be added in halls. Departing passengers can even spare time at shops at the back of passport control. Moreover, a walkaway will be replaced by a sky train for the passenger boarding bridge and increased gates (16) are likely to be placed in a Y-shape.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nding the number of available planes. At present day, the airport is separated...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...cilities such as bag-drop, car hire and ATM machines will be added in halls. Departing passe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11675126904 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84453345179 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0016025147 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173506523299 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755190792704 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128992170509 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160247787131 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169764817676 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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