Due to the fact that increasing possesion of vehicles over a period of 30 years , the traffic congestion complications have become worse in the number of metropolises .In the next paragraphs , I will discuss this statement and what can be done to overcome this problem .
First of all , it is an irrefutable fact that , the more and more automobiles are being bought by individuals .The reason why the number of countries has industrialized , and the price is cheaper than past .Prior to the period of industralization , only affluent citizens could purchase and use machines .In other words , the more transportation refines , the more traffic jams raises .In China , which is the most modernized state , one rush-hour had continued during three days , despite having an spectacular transport system .
However , it is not intractable issu thus adminstrations should establish acute rights .In the first place , tariffs ought to be maximized , particularly fuel tax , as a cosequence the amount of pollution will decrease .Air condition and climate will improve , although there are numerous other reasons .Moreover , it will appropriate if the social services are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensity to substitute buying automobiles for using public transport .
As a conluding point , indubitably ownership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus traffic jams are also rising .To alleviate this problem , the authorities should redifine public transportation and set serious rights up .
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the cours 67
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam how true do you think this statement is what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 56
- Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world Others argue that the purpose of a university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge s sake Discuss both sides and give your own opinio 67
- Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks 61
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...ugh there are numerous other reasons .Moreover , it will appropriate if the...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...h there are numerous other reasons .Moreover , it will appropriate if the social...
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... are numerous other reasons .Moreover , it will appropriate if the social ...
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...rous other reasons .Moreover , it will appropriate if the social services ...
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...ropriate if the social services are more advanced and convenient .Threfor...
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...te if the social services are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , po...
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...e social services are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace wi...
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...cial services are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace will h...
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...es are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensi...
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Suggestion: Threfore
... are more advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensity to ...
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...ore advanced and convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensity to su...
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...ed and convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensity to substitute b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...d convenient .Threfore , populace will have propensity to substitute buying ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...refore , populace will have propensity to substitute buying automobiles for...
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...re , populace will have propensity to substitute buying automobiles for us...
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...e will have propensity to substitute buying automobiles for using public ...
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...ity to substitute buying automobiles for using public transport . As a ...
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...to substitute buying automobiles for using public transport . As a conlu...
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... buying automobiles for using public transport . As a conluding point , ...
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...utomobiles for using public transport . As a conluding point , indubitably...
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...es for using public transport . As a conluding point , indubitably owners...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...g public transport . As a conluding point , indubitably ownership of priv...
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Suggestion: ,
...c transport . As a conluding point , indubitably ownership of private ca...
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... As a conluding point , indubitably ownership of private cars has raise...
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...onluding point , indubitably ownership of private cars has raised at an en...
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...nt , indubitably ownership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate ...
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...ndubitably ownership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus...
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...tably ownership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus tra...
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...wnership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus traffic ja...
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...ivate cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus traffic jams are also ris...
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Suggestion: ,
... cars has raised at an enormous rate , thus traffic jams are also rising .T...
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...has raised at an enormous rate , thus traffic jams are also rising .To allev...
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... an enormous rate , thus traffic jams are also rising .To alleviate this prob...
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...e , thus traffic jams are also rising .To alleviate this problem , the author...
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..., thus traffic jams are also rising .To alleviate this problem , the authorit...
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Suggestion:
...fic jams are also rising .To alleviate this problem , the authorities should ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... also rising .To alleviate this problem , the authorities should redifine publ...
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...rising .To alleviate this problem , the authorities should redifine public tr...
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...leviate this problem , the authorities should redifine public transportation ...
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...blem , the authorities should redifine public transportation and set seriou...
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...he authorities should redifine public transportation and set serious rights...
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...uld redifine public transportation and set serious rights up .
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...edifine public transportation and set serious rights up .
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...nsportation and set serious rights up .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50854700855 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15295353031 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.804104017 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.25 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.5 20.7667163134 282% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 178.0 5.01903807615 3546% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118739769246 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782971436268 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531901148365 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782971436268 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531901148365 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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