More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
nowadays, people are becoming seriously overweight. I agree that to solve this problems, we should increase the price of fattening food. To support my point of veiw, i mention two main reasons below.
Firstly, fattening foods is the main cause which makes people gain weight more easily. fattening food ordinary seeing in junk food and fast foods, those are catching up people to buy and consume it. they are also unhealthy foods with large unhealthy oily and fat in them. in addition, nowadays, humans are living modern lives so, it's hard for them to exercise more than 30 minutes a day ( the least time for reducing calories and fat in their body). for instance, most social citizens likely to lie down and surfing mobile phon more than standing up and work out.
Last but not least, fattening foods can affect healthy seriously. Besides some lack of good fattening food like fat from fish or almonds, unhealthy fattening foods appear more widely and cheaper than healthy fattening food. that leads people to buy unhealthy fat foods more than good ones. By the way, fattening foods can affect blood and heart systems easier and faster than other food. for instance, fatty foods are cheaper, and more eye-catching than other healthy foods, so people can buy them easily adding not likely to work out, they can easily have disease conclude: high blood, trouble in the heart system, and hard to breath,...
In conclusion, the price of fattening foods should be increased to improve living qualities and also the health system of humans.
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95366795367 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25050492985 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8253282633 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331228403653 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133490795148 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805621167562 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206569376564 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441707804906 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.