Living in the 21st century, coming along with the industrialized world, technology has been developing so rapidly that students tend to use the internet for their studying. It is sometimes argued that time learning on the internet is time wasted and children should study hard at school. Though this could be true for a certain extent, I believe that studying on the internet is indeed crucial for their learnings on account of self-study ability and the flexibility it offers.
To begin with, thanks to high technology, the internet has established itself as a vital tool for student’s self-study. For example, such browsers as Google, Yahoo,.. help us in learning and discovering abundant resources of information to carry out research on any topic. As a consequence, it can improve their ability to study and gain their lore.
In the second side, there are various blogs which provide the most relevant contents for student’s academic. In other words, it becomes easier to find study-related materials. Additionally, the Internet can obtain the lastest information we require immediately. Therefore, we could nearly study whatever we want and study evevywhere. It helps us not only save precious time but also remain up to date with the fastest information.
To sum up, it is clear that studying on the Internet makes a significant contribution on updating student’s knowledge and brush up on their classroom lessons. Nevertheless, Students still need to balance their time at school with their time studying on the internet conscientiously.
- Do you agree or disagree with this statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school 95
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree 78
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 69
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32388663968 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0277825376 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0387567341 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243756625603 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894851236089 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131130757794 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152326028724 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855393828385 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.