Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on the contribution individuals make to their society by paying taxes. I believe that citizens should have more activities to participate in the development of society.
Paying taxes is citizens’ undeniable obligation. Thanks to these taxes, the government has enough capital for facility building, army development, free education, and a stable society. More importantly, in developing countries, paying taxes is also a big burden for people, and while a number of rich people attempt to find a way to not pay taxes, that results in an increasing wealth gap and social unbalance. Thus, authorities play a leading role in controlling citizens’ paying taxes, distributing these budgets appropriately, and praising individuals who are implementing them sufficiently.
However, if citizens’ responsibility to their society is limited to paying taxes, and the remaining missions are allotted to the government, they will fail to monitor their countries. Enviromental conservation, for example, needs individuals’ help in addition to naturists and political offices. Raising people’s awareness about collecting garbage contributes to the success of these projects, building a refreshed habitat. In addition, citizens also participate in supporting the authorities’ management through charity work and helping poor people. It is true that when indigenous people’s lives are improved, the rate of robbery and social evils will reduce. The local environment will certainly be safer, which will allow people to be more comfortable.
In conclusion, while there are obviously opinions that support the people’s limited responsibilities in paying taxes, I suggest that citizens should enhance their impact on society for a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86046511628 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28790935639 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7002666967 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277616436903 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988412461492 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082472892713 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188436971298 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323948178156 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.