Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In contemporary society, the problem of the environment is still in a controversial stage. But, The majority of people are not concerned about taking consideration into environmental problems. In my perspective, I partially agree about most people are not concerned about environmental problems and explain the reason why in this essay.
Obviously, there is some reason why the majority of people do not take care of environmental problems. First of all, that they are concerned about their family’s health and their work those things more important than taking consideration into environmental problems. Secondly, they care about building houses because demand of find out accommodation day by day more increase, invented many intelligent vehicles to convenience for moving. So, people haven’t enough pay attention about problems of environment.
However, in nowadays, many people are paying attention about these issues. For example, recent studies show that many activies about donating money into planting trees, protecting environment advoiding destroying forest, forest fires have been organized by the youth. Furthermore, young generations are particularly activities about planting trees, cleaning trash garbage. Additionally, governments in many countries also announce a law to protect the environment into the most serve punishment somebody are trashing garbage, destroying forest.
In conclusion, there is some reason people are not paying attention to about environmental issues I mention essay above. Personally, I mean that society now has people care about environmental problems also has people are not care about these problems and I a part young generation future, then I will support the protection of the environment globally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...bout problems of environment. However, in nowadays, many people are paying attention about...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...into the most serve punishment somebody are trashing garbage, destroying forest. ...
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Line 4, column 259, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...are not care about these problems and I a part young generation future, then I wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, i mean, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81007751938 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11809359414 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4432703903 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289105337808 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111351635827 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082730034096 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182095454312 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066330232322 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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