Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others think that the human being is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The current decades have witnessed a phenomenon of animal extinction on a large scale and this has also become a topic of general interest. While a group suggests that this is a pressing issue and must be tackled as soon as possible, there are still those who contend that investment in humankind should be given precedence. Although both schools of thought are justifiable, I assert that it is essential to implement wild animal protection due to the appearance of several adverse bearings if the public still ignores this issue.
It is usually believed that the demise of some wildlife creatures does not have a clear inextricable relationship with human beings, that said, the colossal amount of expense spent on preserving wild animals is not pragmatic. Given the fact that a host of undesired events in politics and society is incurring in numerous nations and effectively causing serious problems such as famine, immigration or wars, animal extinction seems to pale in comparison. In addition, the Earth experienced some biotic crises in the past billions of years, however, some animals just changed their shape, or even have existed of late, such as cockroaches.
Nevertheless, combating the extinction of some animals should still be paid significant attention to as the consequences of not doing so can be out of our control. The disappearance of some wildlife species is a sign of biological unbalance and the disruption in the food cycle. This may create the inexorable increase in the price of that particular food, which directly does people who demand to enjoy those kinds of food a disservice. Besides, the extinction of some beneficial species may spell trouble for agriculture in a majority of regions. The bird is a telling example, as they assist farmers in removing harmful worms, which sustain their lives by consuming grass and vegetables.
In conclusion, taking measures to remedy the immediate obstacles of humans is never considered wrongdoing, however, helping animals that are in dire need of protection ought also to be encouraged to prevent harmful effects that this phenomenon may pose to both the ecosystem and human beings.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to both the ecosystem and human beings.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88823652149 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.602206803 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230970321182 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755891299698 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316959574295 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12718636371 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135352366261 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to both the ecosystem and human beings.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88823652149 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.602206803 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230970321182 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755891299698 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316959574295 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12718636371 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135352366261 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.