The bar chart on the next page shows the results of a survey of the reading habits of male and female first-year university students at a university in the UK. The pie chart show the amount of time male and female students spend on various activities.
The bar chart shows information about the reading habits of freshmen at a university and the pie charts illustrate the time amount students use for different activities.
Overall, quality-newspaper is the most popular type of publications, and most female students read it, whereas most male counterparts prefer tabloids. Moreover, most university students from two groups focus on studying.
Quality is the most preferred source of information with two genders, with nearly 160 students in total. The second-ranked source belongs to tabloids, with about 150 readers in total. Moreover, male tabloids and comics readers approximately double that of females, but non-fiction male readers almost halved the number of the opposite gender readers. As regards journals, fiction and magazines are the ranges of publication that have small gaps between readers from both genders.
Most female and male students spend time studying, with 60% and 45%, respectively. However, female students devote just 10% of their time to sports, which ranks second for males (25%). The same pattern also repeats with socializing, with just 10% for females. Male students use equal time for socializing and working (15%), whereas 20% of time is devoted to working for females.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49740932642 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83014458671 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9833490499 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304930396022 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117043143374 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116701827011 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204290064607 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127687039769 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The bar chart shows information about th...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students use for different activities. Overall, quality-newspaper is the most p...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts from two groups focus on studying. Quality is the most preferred source of ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aps between readers from both genders. Most female and male students spend time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49740932642 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83014458671 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9833490499 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304930396022 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117043143374 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116701827011 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204290064607 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127687039769 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.