Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctorsand engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. To me both side have their reasons but to me, i think that professionals have their right to choose where they want to work and because i’m more convinced with the reasons of peoples think that the professionals should be free to work in another country if they wish more than the reseasons of people think that proessionals should be required to work in the country where they did their training in.
The opions are that the professionals should be required to work in the country they training in are that they should stayed in the country to help the country to develop in the urban and rural area, help address the stortage of skill professionals problem in the country and they could be familiar to technology and people there which help to improve their skill in the familar environment.
While the reasons of people think that the professionals should be free to work in another country if they want that are professionals can help a poor country develop or get better in rich country, they could also improve lots of people opions about the country they train from, they have more chances to use new technology and they still can help the country they train by give part of their imcome back to the country they train from.
In my opions, i think no sides are wrong but i think the professionals is the person who choose their future and what they want because both options will help the country the perfessionals train from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70103092784 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5022232412 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.384879725086 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.003152053 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.0 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.648848510276 0.244688304435 265% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.447946166012 0.084324248473 531% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163020239425 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.418678867319 0.151304729494 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193543132246 0.056905535591 340% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.0946893788 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 11.3001002004 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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