Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas are the main energy source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power, or wind power. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that in some parts of the world, while lots of countries are using fossil fuel as their major energy resource, there are some others relying on renewable energy. From my perspective, this trend is definitely an advantageous development.
Using coal, oil and natural gas as the main energy source can result in several problems related to people's health and the environment. Not to mention, the carbon dioxide emissions from vehicle engines or factories directly lower the quality of air condition that takes a toll on people’s health, especially respiratory-related diseases. Many researches have shown that, people in large cities such as London or Shanghai, which have high ratio of poor air quality, their admissions to hospital rise sharply. Furthermore, the burning of fossil fuel also adds to the greenhouse effect at a time when international efforts to reduce our carbon footprint must succeed in the effort to fight climate change.
On the other hand, there are numerous benefits when using alternative energy. To commence with, using renewable energy, for example putting solar panels above our houses or building wild farms, neither pollutes the air nor depletes natural resources. In terms of human health, it plays a role in reducing the risks of respiratory disorders. Moreover, such alternative energy is environmentally friendly that keeps our surroundings from deteriorating. It would minimize habitat destruction and tackle the pollution that stems from the activities of the fossil fuel extractive industries.
In conclusion, renewable energy usage as major resource rather than fossil fuel can bring several benefits to either individuals or environment, which I believe is totally a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
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Line 2, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on or Shanghai, which have high ratio of poor air quality, their admissions to ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48327137546 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00474788171 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3010761462 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234434427189 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770864276356 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664921819919 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131161549677 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225629940817 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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